Boating - part 20

Well guys - I just posted part 20 of Boating. Things are taking a bit of a swing for the serious! I have had lots of feedback that there wasn't enough drama in this story. Well, get a load of the drama in this part!

I was contemplating making this one a cliff-hanger episode, but given how slow I am at getting installations to this story out, I guessed that would be a really unpopular move :-)

Anyway - as always, comments welcome - either here in the blog or by email at orbis_feedback at orbisproductions dot com

Cheers guys

Orbis